{"id":7746,"date":"2019-09-02T17:00:57","date_gmt":"2019-09-03T00:00:57","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/?p=7746"},"modified":"2022-12-13T11:46:14","modified_gmt":"2022-12-13T19:46:14","slug":"secrets-to-good-college-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/secrets-to-good-college-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"11 Secrets to Good College Essays"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Your hands tremble as you nervously open the letter that just arrived from your dream school. And then\u2026<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8564\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected.png\" alt=\"rubber stamped image of the word rejected\" width=\"400\" height=\"151\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected.png 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected-300x113.png 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8564 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20400%20151%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"rubber stamped image of the word rejected\" width=\"400\" height=\"151\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20400%20151%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 400w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected.png 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected-300x113.png 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/rejected.png\"><\/p>\n<p><i>\u201cNoooooo<\/i>!\u201d you scream in anguish as your dreams (and your soul) are crushed by those big red letters staring back at you. Okay, an actual rejection letter would probably let you down way more gently than that. The soul-crushing disappointment, though? That\u2019s super real and, well, crushing.<\/p>\n<p>But your dreams don\u2019t have to end that way. Use these 11 secrets to good college essays to help you nail all your college application essays and keep your dreams on track.<\/p>\n<h2>11 Secrets to Good College Essays<\/h2>\n<p>Whether you\u2019re writing a general <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/personal-statement\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">personal statement<\/a> or one of what feels like a million supplemental <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/admission-essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">admission essays<\/a>, the nuts and bolts of what creates good college essays don\u2019t really change <i>that<\/i> much. That means the secrets below apply in most cases.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #1: Decode the prompt<\/h3>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8574 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode.jpeg\" alt=\"man wearing goofy contraption on head next to the words crack the code\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode.jpeg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode-300x200.jpeg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8574 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"man wearing goofy contraption on head next to the words crack the code\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode.jpeg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode-300x200.jpeg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/crackthecode.jpeg\"><\/p>\n<p>The goal of essentially every prompt (as well as the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-personal-statement-makes-statement\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">general personal statement<\/a>) is to give the admissions committee insight into who you are\u2014as a person, as a student, and most importantly, <b>as a potential student and community member at that specific school<\/b>.<\/p>\n<p>In other words, decoding the prompt is essential to your admission prospects. Once you decode the prompt, you can focus on showing the committee who you are and why you\u2019re the best candidate within the scope of the prompt itself.<\/p>\n<p>But you <i>also <\/i>need to understand what\u2019s being asked specifically in a prompt <i>and<\/i> recognize the hints about the scope and structure of your response. Not sure how to do that? That\u2019s okay. I\u2019m here to help.<\/p>\n<h4>How to decode a college essay prompt<\/h4>\n<p>Let\u2019s look at an example.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>Prompt:<\/strong> \u201cTell us about personal, social or family challenges you have faced. How have you dealt with them, and how have they shaped your thinking? (500 words or less)\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The first hint is the word length.<\/p>\n<p>While pretty standard, 500 words doesn\u2019t give you a ton of space to work with. Thus, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/concise-writing-strong-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">being clear and concise<\/a> is key.<\/p>\n<p>Second, the prompt is asking you to address three different things:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Share personal, social, or family challenges<\/li>\n<li>Show how you dealt with them<\/li>\n<li>Show how you changed because of those challenges<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>This tells you that what you write about has to be directly related to you or impact you personally. You can\u2019t tell a story about something that happened before you were born or about something that happened to your best friend and didn\u2019t involve you.<\/p>\n<p>The question is also asking for information that highlights important aspects of your character, background, or skills. While you might feel like the death of your grandparent is the most compelling story to tell, sharing the story of leading a group in class to victory on a project might be more enlightening for the committee.<\/p>\n<p>Finally, the phrasing in the question suggests that you really need to bring home the lessons you\u2019ve learned and how you\u2019re going to apply those lessons in college and beyond.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/the-lessons-ive-learned-from-getting-stuck-in-a-closet-RUhuH7nX\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Read this response<\/a> to see how well one student decoded (or didn\u2019t decode) the prompt above.<\/p>\n<p>The main takeaway is, regardless of the prompt, understanding <b>what <\/b>a prompt is really asking is central to writing good college essays. Want more help on how to tackle a specific prompt? Check out these resources:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/types-of-college-essay-prompts\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">10 Common Types of College Essay Prompts\u2014and How to Crush Them<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.teenlife.com\/blogs\/how-decode-common-app-college-essay-prompts-2018-19\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Decode the Common App College Essay Prompts for 2018-19<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3>Secret #2: Think like the admissions committee<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_8576\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-8576\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8576 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap.jpg\" alt=\"woman wearing thinking cap surrounded by speech balloons\" width=\"500\" height=\"331\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap-300x199.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8576 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20331%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"woman wearing thinking cap surrounded by speech balloons\" width=\"500\" height=\"331\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20331%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap-300x199.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/thinking-cap.jpg\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-8576\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u201cThinking cap\u201d by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/southpaw2305\/4014747243\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Clare Black<\/a>, Flickr.com (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY 2.0<\/a>)\/text changed<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>The admissions officers decide whether you\u2019re admitted to your dream school. That means, to write a killer essay, you need to think like them and figure out what they care about.<\/p>\n<p>Ultimately, they want insight into your perspective, your thinking, and your self-awareness. But they\u2019re also considering the following:<\/p>\n<h4>What impact you\u2019ll have<\/h4>\n<ul>\n<li>What do you value about <b>this <\/b>school?<\/li>\n<li>What experiences have shaped your perspective and are unique to <b>you <\/b>(and are obvs worth sharing with your peers)?<\/li>\n<li>What do you want to get out of the college experience, <b>specifically <\/b>at this school?<\/li>\n<li>What strengths will serve you well in this program and the community? (Many prompts will directly ask this, but even if they don\u2019t, trust me\u2014the admissions committee wants to know.)<\/li>\n<li>How will you aid your peers?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The admissions committee often also wants to get an idea of what impact you&#8217;ll have on the reputation of the college\u2014both during your college years and beyond. This isn&#8217;t universally true (obviously a community college doesn&#8217;t care if you want to cure cancer). But most admissions committees are considering your potential ROI (return on investment).<\/p>\n<p>In other words, make it clear to them what you want to ultimately achieve in your career. Whatever that is, it will (eventually) reflect back on the school you attended, so it helps them decide if you\u2019re a good fit.<\/p>\n<h4>Demonstrated interest and yield<\/h4>\n<p>Demonstrated interest is pretty self-explanatory\u2014it\u2019s how well you demonstrate your interest in the specific school. That means showing why, SPECIFICALLY, you want to attend this school. If you could remove the name of the school or program in your essays and drop in any other school\/program name, you\u2019re not effectively demonstrating your interest.<\/p>\n<p>Yield is the percentage of accepted students who actually enroll. When <i>you <\/i>can demonstrate your interest, admissions officers are more likely to assume you\u2019d actually enroll if accepted\u2014and thus increase the yield of their offers (something that\u2019s good for <i>them<\/i>).<\/p>\n<p>Want more insight on what the admissions committee is thinking? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/personal-statement-advice-experts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Personal Statement Advice: Here\u2019s What the Admissions Experts Have to Say<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\t<\/span><\/p><div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Want to stand out?<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Let an expert editor help.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/admission-essay-editing\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Edit my admission essay.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<h3>Secret #3: Embrace a theme<\/h3>\n<p>Good college essays have a narrative or theme that connects all of the ideas. Period. Even if the prompt itself is pretty open-ended, your response should have a purpose and be centered around a theme.<\/p>\n<p>That means making clear connections that <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-narrow-a-topic\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">bring the theme into focus<\/a> throughout your essay.<\/p>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8568 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus.jpg\" alt=\"hand holding camera lens focused on a gravel road\" width=\"500\" height=\"342\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus-300x205.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8568 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20342%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"hand holding camera lens focused on a gravel road\" width=\"500\" height=\"342\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20342%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus-300x205.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/focus.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>For example, maybe you want to prevent needless suffering due to lack of access to preventative healthcare. Or maybe you have a lifelong passion for artistic expression or a desire to connect with others from different cultures.<\/p>\n<p>Whatever *it* is, you want a theme that tells <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/20-narrative-essay-topics\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">an engaging and compelling story<\/a>. Then make sure that narrative is cohesive throughout your application essay. What you don\u2019t want is a list of key ideas that feel disconnected.<\/p>\n<p>If you need help identifying a theme, here are a few posts that can help you <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/6-prewriting-strategies\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">brainstorm<\/a> ideas:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/college-essay-ideas-stand-out\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Come Up With College Essay Ideas That Stand Out<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/personal-statement-topics-questions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">4 Must-Answer Questions Before Brainstorming Personal Statement Topics<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/choose-the-best-personal-statement-topics\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Personal Statement Topics: A Step-by-Step Tutorial to Finding Yours!<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Finally, many of the same elements of writing a personal narrative essay apply to college application essays. That means you can gain insight in how to approach your application essays by understanding <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/personal-narrative-essay-writing-tips\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">what makes a personal narrative powerful<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #4: Outline before you write<\/h3>\n<p>Once you know <i>what<\/i> you\u2019re going to write about (see Secret #1 if you need help decoding the prompt), an outline is your bestiest of besties. Mapping out your essay in an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/7-essay-outline-templates-get-essay-going\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">outline<\/a> or <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/graphic-organizers-for-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">using a graphic organizer<\/a> will help keep your essay focused.<\/p>\n<p>More than that, it\u2019ll help you organize your ideas logically.<\/p>\n<p>And most importantly, outlining makes it easier for you to see how to connect different sections to a central idea or theme (see Secret #3).<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #5: Be authentic and unique<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_8573\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-8573\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8573 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique.jpg\" alt=\"person with the word unique tattooed on upper back\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique-300x200.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8573 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20334%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"person with the word unique tattooed on upper back\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20334%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique-300x200.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/unique.jpg\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-8573\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u201cUnique\u201d by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/xlordashx\/8418067887\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Ashley Webb<\/a>, Flickr.com (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY 2.0<\/a>)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Everyone has a unique story to tell. Embrace yours, and be authentic in telling it.<\/p>\n<p>What do I mean by that?<\/p>\n<p>First, write in your own voice <i>and<\/i> at your own writing ability. <i>Being fake will be obvious, yo.<\/i> Don\u2019t make stuff up, don\u2019t try to pretend to be someone you\u2019re not, and don\u2019t use so-called \u201cbig words\u201d just because you think they make you sound smart. <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-become-a-better-writer-smart\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">They don\u2019t<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Second, write authentically about your experiences, your thoughts, your goals, and so on. If you were telling a friend about something, how would you talk about it? You\u2019d be real and share your true thoughts, feelings, and aspirations, right? That\u2019s the voice you want to capture.<\/p>\n<p>Third, show why you\u2019re unique and what makes you stand out from other applicants. How? Focus on key experiences that have shaped who you are. How you\u2019ve responded to, learned from, and grown as a result of those experiences are the details that make you unique. <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/2-personal-statement-examples\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Make a strong statement<\/a> that tells YOUR unique story.<\/p>\n<p>One caveat here is that you also want to keep Secrets #6, #7, and #8 in mind when crafting unique and authentic narratives.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #6: Perfect the art of the humblebrag<\/h3>\n<p>You\u2019re a badass, so own it\u2014humbly, of course. This delicate balance lies in showing the admissions committee <i>why<\/i> you\u2019re a badass without explicitly saying, \u201cI\u2019m a badass, yo!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Enter the humblebrag.<\/p>\n<p>Writing about yourself can be tough. I get it. But your application essays are one of the few places you\u2019re<i> expected <\/i>to toot your own horn. It\u2019s your job to show the admissions committee how awesome you are so that giving you an offer is a no-brainer.<\/p>\n<p>Think of humblebragging as sort of like passive-aggressive bragging. You want to project confidence about who you are, why you\u2019re unique, what attribute you\u2019re zeroing in on, what you achieved, etc., but do so in a subtle rather than cocky way.<\/p>\n<p>Let\u2019s look at a few examples:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>Example #1 (strong English skills):<\/strong> \u201cLearning English was a challenge, but I worked hard and placed at the top of my English Language Learning class and received top marks on the TESOL exam.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>Example #2 (leadership experience):<\/strong> \u201cMy peers frequently looked to me for leadership and guidance, electing me to serve as group leader to ensure our best results.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>Example #3 (returning to school after a long absence):<\/strong> \u201cBecause I have had time to develop myself personally and professionally, I bring a strong sense of maturity and responsibility to my work.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Trust me, I know how uncomfortable it can be to sell yourself, but that\u2019s the whole point of college application essays, so don\u2019t sell yourself short. And definitely don\u2019t write about how you\u2019re not very good at something. Embrace your awesomeness, whatever it is, in ways that show your strengths, character, ambitions, and drive.<\/p>\n<p>Still feeling a little uncomfortable braggin\u2019 about your badassery? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/essay-about-yourself\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Write an Essay About Yourself With Confidence<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #7: Put on your persuasive pants<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_8575\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-8575\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8575 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants.jpg\" alt=\"person wearing patchwork pants that make them feel good\" width=\"500\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants-200x300.jpg 200w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-8575 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20750%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"person wearing patchwork pants that make them feel good\" width=\"500\" height=\"750\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20750%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants-200x300.jpg 200w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/pants.jpg\"><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-8575\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">\u201cMy new pants\u201d by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/robinelaine\/61265994\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Robin Taylor<\/a>, Flickr (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY 2.0<\/a>)\/speech bubble added<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Regardless of what you\u2019re writing about in your application essays, you want to be persuasive in your tone, in your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/ultimate-guide-perfect-word-choice-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">word choices<\/a>, and in the way you project confidence. How?<\/p>\n<h4>Don\u2019t be wishy-washy<\/h4>\n<p>Promise, right now, to ban the phrases \u201cI believe,\u201d \u201cI think,\u201d and \u201cI hope\u201d (and any other phrases that lack an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/authoritative-voice\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">authoritative voice<\/a>) from your application essays. Those phrases actually <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-more-effectively-persuasive-technique\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">undermine your projected confidence<\/a>, undermine your conviction in whatever follows the phrases, and ultimately, undermine the admissions committee\u2019s confidence <i>in you<\/i>.<\/p>\n<h4>Use persuasive writing techniques<\/h4>\n<p>Your words and your approach matter <b>a lot<\/b> when you\u2019re trying to be persuasive. At the core of persuasion are ethos, pathos, and logos (you can read about how to use them in your writing <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/ethos-pathos-logos\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">here<\/a>), but there are many <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/persuasive-techniques-more-convincing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">persuasive techniques<\/a> you can use to convince the admissions committee that you\u2019re perfect for the school.<\/p>\n<h4>Don\u2019t use underwhelming aspirations<\/h4>\n<p>While you want to be authentic (see Secret #5), you don\u2019t want to be underwhelming by saying something like, &#8220;I want to work at a mid-tier company in the plastics industry.&#8221; Not very compelling, right?<\/p>\n<p>Instead, think big. Be bold. You should shoot for the stars in terms of your goals and aspirations. NO ONE WILL FOLLOW UP ON THIS. That said, you don\u2019t have free license to lie or BS your way through your college application essays. Just be fearless and confident.<\/p>\n<p>Describe the absolute dream. Then convince the admissions committee not only that you\u2019re equipped to achieve it, but also that this school is central to making that dream a reality.<\/p>\n<p>And hey, if you need to literally put on a snazzy pair of pants to feel more persuasive, no judgment here. I may or may not have worn silver leopard-print pants covered in glitter when writing <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/persuasive-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">persuasive essays<\/a> in college.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #8: Avoid a snoozefest<\/h3>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8570 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7.jpg\" alt=\"tired dog wearing glasses thinking about biscuits\" width=\"500\" height=\"359\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7-300x215.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8570 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20359%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"tired dog wearing glasses thinking about biscuits\" width=\"500\" height=\"359\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20359%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7-300x215.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secret7.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>Your goal is to be accepted, which means not putting the admissions committee to sleep, obviously. The admissions committee literally has to read THOUSANDS of essays from applicants just like you who are just as eager to be accepted.<\/p>\n<p>The good news is that there are some techniques you can use to get\u2014and keep\u2014their attention by being engaging and telling a compelling narrative. How? I\u2019m glad you asked. Here are a few things to keep in mind:<\/p>\n<h4>Use a good hook<\/h4>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/?s=hook\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Starting with a good hook<\/a> is essential to writing good application essays. Why? You want to get the admissions committee engaged with your essay from the very first sentence. Need help developing a compelling opening? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-start-a-personal-statement\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Start a Personal Statement the Right Way<\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-attention-grabbers-that-work\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Write Attention Grabbers That Work<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h4>SHOW, don\u2019t tell, the committee why you\u2019re awesome and a good fit for the school<\/h4>\n<p>In other words, share a story. Don\u2019t simply tell the admissions officers something. SHOW them through the actions you took, how your thinking shifted, how you were impacted by something, what you felt&#8230;yada, yada, yada. Tap into details that evoke emotions using descriptive, emotive words. <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/show-dont-tell-narrative-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Paint a picture that\u2019s compelling<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h4>Focus on what you\u2019re passionate about<\/h4>\n<p>Don\u2019t write about something just because you think it will be impressive. Admissions officers will see right through that. If you choose something that you\u2019re passionate about, the enthusiasm behind it will show. And <i>that\u2019s <\/i>super important for writing good college essays.<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #9: Keep the focus on YOU<\/h3>\n<p>This seems obvious, but you\u2019d be surprised how many students use too much valuable essay space to talk about something or someone else that\u2019s more tangential to their own story.<\/p>\n<p>For instance, a common mistake is focusing completely on an event that took place, such as an event you volunteered at, something monumental that happened to you, or something that happened to everyone (like 9\/11).<\/p>\n<p>While what occurred is important, you need to demonstrate how it affected YOU and how YOU felt. Admissions officers want to see how YOU think and how YOU\u2019VE grown. The essay is the only place on YOUR application to truly take them into YOUR mind.<\/p>\n<p>The same goes for if you\u2019re writing about someone who inspired YOU or shaped who YOU are in some critical way.<\/p>\n<p>In other words, YOU are the star (in case me screaming it at you in all caps 100 times didn\u2019t emphasize that enough, heh). Bask in the spotlight!<\/p>\n<h3>Secret #10: End with pizzazz<\/h3>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8571 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9.jpg\" alt=\"mic drop with speech bubble that says reject that, yo\" width=\"500\" height=\"336\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9-300x202.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8571 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20336%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"mic drop with speech bubble that says reject that, yo\" width=\"500\" height=\"336\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20336%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9-300x202.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/secretno9.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>The end of your application essay, whatever the prompt, is your mic-drop moment. It\u2019s your last chance (in that essay, anyway) to make a lasting impression, so <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-end-an-essay-with-authority\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">make it count<\/a>!<\/p>\n<p>Dial into the core takeaway you want the reader to remember and end with something that brings your theme (see Secret #3) together cohesively while making a strong statement.<\/p>\n<p>Here are a few examples of powerful closings:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><b>Theme #1: <\/b>Developing resilience through adversity<\/p>\n<p><b>Closing: <\/b>I am not here before you today in spite of my setbacks, but rather because of how they challenged me and inspired me to change and adapt. The barriers helped me build resiliency and led me to pursue my dreams, knowing that I have the strength and determination it takes to succeed and make a difference in the lives of others.<\/p>\n<p><b>Theme #2:<\/b> My father, my role model<\/p>\n<p><b>Closing:<\/b> To me, my father epitomized success. I idolized him as only a son can, and even when he faced incredible setbacks and had to regroup, I saw his strength and determination as a source of inspiration. I aspire to someday have the same impact on those around me, share the same love with my family, and see the same intense respect and admiration in my own son\u2019s eyes. Only then will I truly know success.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<h3>Secret #11: Get a second pair of eyes<\/h3>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8567 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes.jpg\" alt=\"black and white closeup of eyeball\" width=\"500\" height=\"387\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes-300x232.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes-225x175.jpg 225w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8567 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20387%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"black and white closeup of eyeball\" width=\"500\" height=\"387\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20387%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes-300x232.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes-225x175.jpg 225w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/09\/eyes.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>Like anything of monumental importance, getting a second (or third or fourth) pair of eyes on your college application essays can provide crucial feedback. And the first 10 secrets here convey just how much thought needs to go into your essays\u2014and the aspects that are essential to getting them right.<\/p>\n<p>Friends, family members, teachers, guidance counselors, and others in your life can probably give you some broad-level feedback on whether your essays are compelling. But sometimes the surest way to tell your BEST story is with the help of an impartial observer.<\/p>\n<p>Enter <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/admission-essay-editing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Kibin&#8217;s admission essay editors<\/a>\u2014who know all the secrets to good college essays.<\/p>\n<p>We&#8217;ll help you polish your essays to make sure you\u2019re on the right track\u2014to avoid that soul-crushing defeat of a rejection from your dream school.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Your hands tremble as you nervously open the letter that just arrived from your dream school. And then\u2026 \u201cNoooooo!\u201d you scream in anguish as your dreams (and your soul) are crushed by those big red letters staring back at you. 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