{"id":7744,"date":"2019-08-26T17:00:34","date_gmt":"2019-08-27T00:00:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/?p=7744"},"modified":"2019-10-04T13:25:05","modified_gmt":"2019-10-04T20:25:05","slug":"how-to-start-a-personal-statement","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-start-a-personal-statement\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Start a Personal Statement the Right Way"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Imagine you\u2019re auditioning to be a contestant on a cool new TV show that requires you to traverse the country in search of clues. If you get to the final destination first, you win a million dollars. (Not a bad deal, right?)<\/p>\n<p>As you step in front of a panel of rather intimidating celebrity judges for your audition, they eye you up for a few seconds, and then one of them says, \u201cIn 500 words, tell us why we should choose you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Your entire audition rests on the answer to this one question. A million thoughts (and thoughts of a million dollars) rush through your mind. Should you lead with a funny story? Should you be serious and scholarly? Should you begin with esoteric thoughts about the universe?<\/p>\n<p>There\u2019s no time to worry about that now. You wish you knew <i>this <\/i>was the question they were going to ask. You wish you had time to prepare.<\/p>\n<p>The personal statement is the college admissions equivalent of trying out for such a TV show\u2014except, of course, you have time to prepare, and the prize is college admission, not a million dollars.<\/p>\n<p>Like the TV audition, your college \u201caudition\u201d means you have just one chance (and a few hundred words) to prove your worth.<\/p>\n<p>First impressions are everything, so impressing the judges (or in this case admissions reps) right off the bat is certainly going to improve your chances of being admitted.<\/p>\n<p>Not sure how to make that happen? Here\u2019s how to start your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/personal-statement-advice-experts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">personal statement<\/a> the right way.<\/p>\n<h2>How to Start a Personal Statement the Right Way<\/h2>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8448\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"the word start painted on a road stretching into horizon\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8448 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20375%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"the word start painted on a road stretching into horizon\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20375%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/road-368719_640-300x225.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>Starting a personal statement the right way means that your opening lines make readers take notice and make them want to keep reading to learn more about you.<\/p>\n<p>This clever, attention-grabbing opening is also known as a hook. You know, kinda like a fishing hook (or a fishing lure). It\u2019s shiny, attractive, and irresistible.<\/p>\n<p>To learn the basics of writing a good hook, check out these blog posts:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/what-is-a-hook-sentence\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">What Is a Hook Sentence? (Infographic)<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/good-hook-sentences\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Write Good Hook Sentences<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>With the basics of writing hooks under your belt, let\u2019s move on to the specifics of writing excellent hooks for a personal statement.<\/p>\n<h2>How Long Should an Introduction Be in a Personal Statement?<\/h2>\n<p>A personal statement is generally about 500 words. That\u2019s not a lot of space. Thus, your opening shouldn\u2019t be more than a few sentences.<\/p>\n<p>You need to hook the reader quickly and move on to the main point of your statement.<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/a-statement-of-my-interest-in-pursuing-a-career-in-physiology-program-el3lglaL\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">example<\/a>:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cWho are you?\u201d my grandmother asked me. I was confused by the question. How could a lady that had practically raised me not know who I am? My grandmother was diagnosed with Alzheimer&#8217;s disease just three months prior; three months after her diagnosis, my grandmother had forgotten how to walk, eat, and in the end breathe; however, that one question stuck with me: who am I?<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The start of this personal statement is only 66 words long, but it\u2019s full of information. Readers learn about the writer\u2019s grandmother, her health condition, and the important question that leads this writer to some form of self-discovery.<\/p>\n<p>Readers will also be intrigued and continue reading. Why? They want to learn more about the connection between the writer, his or her grandmother, and the connection to the writer&#8217;s self-discovery and college admission.<\/p>\n<p>The takeaway? Keep it short and sweet. Don\u2019t try to ramble on in order to take up space. Use <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/3-ways-to-focus-on-concrete-language-in-your-next-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">clear, specific wording<\/a>, and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/ultimate-guide-perfect-word-choice-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">choose your words wisely<\/a> to ensure they\u2019ll have the most impact.<\/p>\n<h2>How Do You Write a Hook in a Personal Statement?<\/h2>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8447\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640-300x199.jpg\" alt=\"array of fishing hooks and lures arranged on wooden background\" width=\"500\" height=\"332\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8447 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20332%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"array of fishing hooks and lures arranged on wooden background\" width=\"500\" height=\"332\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20332%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/fishing-2669219_640-300x199.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>If you\u2019re writing an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/5-paragraph-essay-structure\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">essay<\/a> for a class, you know that different essays often require different types of hooks. For instance, depending on the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/6-popular-types-essays-survival-guide\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">type of essay<\/a>, you might begin the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-an-essay-introduction\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">introduction<\/a> by using a quote, an anecdote, or statistic to interest your reader.<\/p>\n<p>Starting your personal statement is the same in that you\u2019ll need to choose the right kind of hook for your statement.<\/p>\n<p>Below are two hooks you might consider.<\/p>\n<h3>Open with an anecdote<\/h3>\n<p>By starting with a story or personal example, you can frame the essay to help shape your discussion.<\/p>\n<p>This type of opening works well for personal statements that describe a lesson you\u2019ve learned, for personal statements that discuss adversity or challenges you have overcome, or for personal statements that use humor.<\/p>\n<p>Here are the opening lines from a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/overcoming-my-adversities-by-showing-dedication-to-my-education-2r5lZndl\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">sample personal statement<\/a>:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cI stand at a mere 4\u2019 11\u201d. Though small, I am mightier than many 6\u20190\u201d men. This strength is not the result of physical exercise; rather, it is the product of a physically disabling medical condition that I have had to overcome throughout my life. With this medical condition I never thought I would make it to college; now here I am, 21 years old and applying to law school.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>This opening hooks readers because they want to know not only about the medical condition and adversity that this writer has conquered but also how this connects to law school and becoming a successful lawyer.<\/p>\n\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Need to polish your paper?<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Let our expert editors help.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-editing-proofreading\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Edit my essay.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<h3>Set the stage<\/h3>\n<p>By starting in the middle of the story (often by opening your statement with <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-dialogue-in-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">dialogue<\/a>), you&#8217;re able to put readers in the middle of the action. They\u2019re already involved in the scene and want to learn more about the story.<\/p>\n<p>Here are the opening lines from another <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/a-personal-account-of-suffering-from-chronic-stuffiness-LQRChEr4\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">personal statement in our examples library<\/a>:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cClose your mouth, Tiffany,\u201d my older brother would say to me. \u201cI can\u2019t, my nose is stuffy,\u201d I replied back. As long as I can remember I have always suffered from chronic stuffiness whether it was during the summer or winter, I just never had the ability to breathe out of my nose with full capacity. My stuffy nose ignited my curiosity about how the human body functioned and I would often sift through hundreds of pages of my mom\u2019s Harvard and Mayo clinic books to try and diagnose why I was always congested or other ailments I may have suffered from and try and diagnose myself.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>This opening hooks readers because they want to know how the story ends. They\u2019re already invested in the story and want to know why the writer was always stuffy and why this fact is important to her future education and career goals.<\/p>\n<h2>What Should You Avoid in a Personal Statement?<\/h2>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8446\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640-300x199.jpg\" alt=\"sleepy bulldog on a beach chair\" width=\"500\" height=\"332\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8446 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20332%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"sleepy bulldog on a beach chair\" width=\"500\" height=\"332\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20332%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/dog-848390_640-300x199.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>Just as there are strategies that make your readers eager to continue reading, some strategies are a definite yawn and will put the average reader to sleep.<\/p>\n<p>Below are two things to <b>avoid <\/b>when starting your personal statement.<\/p>\n<h3>Avoid clich\u00e9s<\/h3>\n<p>Definitely avoid clich\u00e9s. Clich\u00e9s are <a href=\"http:\/\/languagelearningbase.com\/88938\/cliche-definition-examples-cliches-cliches-avoid-writing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">tired expressions<\/a> that we\u2019ve heard a gazillion times. They\u2019re so common that they\u2019ve lost their punch.<\/p>\n<p>For instance, if you\u2019re writing a personal statement about overcoming adversity, <b>don\u2019t <\/b>start with \u201cwhat doesn\u2019t kill us only makes us stronger.\u201d Or if you\u2019re writing about how you\u2019ve drawn strength from your family, <b>don\u2019t <\/b>lead with \u201cblood is thicker than water.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Readers have heard these phrases far too many times, and if they feel your opening is less than original, they\u2019re more likely to think that your entire personal statement is the same.<\/p>\n<h3>Avoid rephrasing the prompt as your opening line<\/h3>\n<p>When you were younger, you were taught to answer questions by including the wording of the original question in your reply. For instance, if the question was, \u201cWhat are the three colors on the American flag?\u201d you would write, \u201cThe three colors on the American flag are red, white, and blue.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>While this strategy is excellent for basic short-answer questions, it should definitely <i>not <\/i>be used when writing the opening of your personal statement.<\/p>\n<p>In other words, if the prompt asks, \u201cWhy do you want to attend this college?\u201d don\u2019t open with, \u201cI want to attend this college because\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<p>These types of openings lack originality. They make your personal statement sound like you\u2019re writing a fourth-grade science report.<\/p>\n<h2>How to Get Additional Help Writing a Personal Statement<\/h2>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8445\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-300x296.jpg\" alt=\"life preserver printed with the words save me\" width=\"500\" height=\"493\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-300x296.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-100x100.jpg 100w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-8445 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20493%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"life preserver printed with the words save me\" width=\"500\" height=\"493\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20493%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-300x296.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-100x100.jpg 100w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/life-saving-swimming-tube-737370_640-300x296.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>If you\u2019re in need of more help, don\u2019t panic.<\/p>\n<p>Take a look at these additional blog posts chock full of expert advice:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-personal-statement-makes-statement\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Write a Personal Statement That Makes a Statement<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/personal-statement-topics-questions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">4 Must-Answer Questions Before Brainstorming Personal Statement Topics<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/types-of-college-essay-prompts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">10 Types of College Essay Prompts\u2014And How to Crush Them<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/college-essay-ideas-stand-out\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Come Up With College Essay Ideas That Stand Out<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/secrets-to-good-college-essays\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">11 Secrets to Good College Essays<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Want to read more examples to see how you might start your personal statement? Check out <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/personal-statement\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">these examples<\/a> from our essay library.<\/p>\n<p>Not quite sure whether your current personal statement stands out or falls flat? Kibin has been <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/personal-statement-editing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">editing personal statements<\/a> since 2011, and our <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/editors\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">team<\/a> is here 24\/7 to give you personal advice on yours.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Imagine you\u2019re auditioning to be a contestant on a cool new TV show that requires you to traverse the country in search of clues. If you get to the final destination first, you win a million dollars. (Not a bad deal, right?) 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