{"id":7537,"date":"2019-05-06T17:00:46","date_gmt":"2019-05-07T00:00:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/?p=7537"},"modified":"2019-08-13T09:09:40","modified_gmt":"2019-08-13T16:09:40","slug":"write-attention-grabbers-that-work","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-attention-grabbers-that-work\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write Attention Grabbers That Work"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><b><i>Read this post to get an awesome grade on your next essay!<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>Okay, so I can\u2019t exactly promise that by reading this post alone you\u2019ll get an awesome grade on your next paper. But that opening line likely grabbed your attention, right?<\/p>\n<p>You\u2019re still reading this post, so not only did the line serve as an attention grabber, but it compelled you to continue reading because you want to learn how to get a better grade.<\/p>\n<p>That\u2019s the entire purpose of an attention grabber: to get readers to take notice and become interested in what you have to say.<\/p>\n<p>How do you write an attention grabber that works for <i>your <\/i>paper? Here are a few tips for writing an opening line that deserves to be noticed.<\/p>\n<h2>But First&#8230; What <i>Not <\/i>to Do<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7674\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640-300x169.jpg\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640-300x169.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7674 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20281%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20281%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640-300x169.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/stop-1374937_640-300x169.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Before we get into a discussion of how to write attention grabbers, let\u2019s stop for a minute to talk about two things you <i>shouldn\u2019t <\/i>do.<\/p>\n<p><b>Don\u2019t write in first person (unless you\u2019re writing a narrative or <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/5-tips-super-successful-reflective-writing-assignment\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">reflective<\/a> essay). <\/b>Most academic essays frown on using <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/use-first-person-writing-essays\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">first person point of view<\/a>, so don\u2019t try to make your statement by including a story about yourself or your opinion.<\/p>\n<p><b>Don\u2019t write in second person. <\/b>It can be tempting to try to engage your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/writing-for-an-audience\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">audience<\/a> by writing a second-person attention grabber that starts with something like \u201cImagine yourself sitting on the beach\u2026\u201d or \u201cWhat would you do if\u2026?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Avoid these tired, boring openings. They\u2019re not only cliche, but they also infuriate profs. (Second-person point of view is also pretty much universally forbidden in <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-formal-essay-impresses\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">formal essays<\/a>.)<\/p>\n<p>Now that we\u2019ve gotten that out of the way, let\u2019s get our discussion rolling and talk about what you <i>should <\/i>do.<\/p>\n<h2>How to Write Attention Grabbers That Work<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7681\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-1024x687.jpg\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"336\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-1024x687.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-300x201.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-768x515.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280.jpg 1280w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7681 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20336%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"336\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20336%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-1024x687.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-300x201.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-768x515.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280.jpg 1280w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/katz-2821316_1280-1024x687.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>When it comes to attention grabbers, one size definitely does not fit all.<\/p>\n<p>What might be a brilliant opening for a description essay will likely be inappropriate for a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/25-interesting-research-paper-topics-get-started\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">research paper<\/a>. (Some attention grabbers, however, <i>can <\/i>be <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-revise-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">revised<\/a> into great openings for different types of papers.)<\/p>\n<p>With that in mind, I\u2019ve included a few types of attention grabbers you might use depending on which <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/6-popular-types-essays-survival-guide\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">type of essay<\/a> you\u2019re writing.<\/p>\n<h3>Narrative essay attention grabbers<\/h3>\n<p>A <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-narrative-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">narrative essay<\/a> tells a story and is one of the few instances in which you\u2019re actually allowed to write in first person.<\/p>\n<p>If you want to get someone interested in hearing your story, try starting with a&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-dialogue-in-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">dialogue quote<\/a> that might be part of your tale, a strange event from your narrative that intrigues readers, or anything else that will <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/show-dont-tell-narrative-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">make your audience take notice<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t start with boring old lines like \u201cLast semester, I\u2026,\u201d \u201cWhen I was five, we\u2026,\u201d or \u201cIt was a night I\u2019ll never forget.\u201d<\/p>\n\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Write better hook sentences.<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Get 14 types of hook sentences + examples.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.getdrip.com\/forms\/53975032\/submissions\/new\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Hook me up.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<p><b>Try something more unique like one of the following openings:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><i>When I woke up and was finally able to focus, I realized I was lying in a field and was surrounded by five Chihuahua puppies.<\/i><\/li>\n<li><i>&#8220;Never put pizza in the dryer\u201d was his famous line, and I never understood what he meant until years after he first uttered the strange phrase.<\/i><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Interested in how someone ends up in a field, surrounded by puppies? Obviously. Want to know why someone would tell you not to put pizza in a dryer? Me too\u2014and that\u2019s <i>exactly <\/i>the result you want. You want people to be interested enough to keep reading.<\/p>\n<p>Looking for more examples of attention grabbers for narrative essays? Check out <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-start-a-narrative-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Start a Narrative Essay: 16 Awesome Hooks<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h3>Descriptive essay attention grabbers<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7673\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640-300x176.jpg\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"293\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640-300x176.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7673 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20293%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"293\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20293%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640-300x176.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/pink-rose-on-empty-swing-3656894_640-300x176.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>A <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-descriptive-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">descriptive essay<\/a> is all about the senses. Your goal is to bring the description to life by incorporating any relevant senses to help readers put themselves in the scene.<\/p>\n<p>It makes sense, then, that an attention grabber for a descriptive essay includes sensory references, right?<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t just start listing things for the sake of including senses, though. Write with a purpose. Write to get people interested in reading more about whatever it is you\u2019re describing.<\/p>\n\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Write better hook sentences.<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Get 14 types of hook sentences + examples.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.getdrip.com\/forms\/53975032\/submissions\/new\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Hook me up.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<p><b>Here are two examples:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><i>The beauty of one simple flower can create a relaxing aura in the madness of a hectic day.<\/i><\/li>\n<li><i>One lonely flower mimics the emptiness of the cold, sterile room.<\/i><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>These two examples use the same flower as their focus, but their messages are entirely different based on the writer\u2019s perspective.<\/p>\n<p>In these examples, readers will (hopefully) be intrigued as to why one flower can impact so much. You might, for instance, describe not only the flower but also the surrounding room and your mood while observing the flower.<\/p>\n<p><b>NOTE:<\/b> While some profs let you write a descriptive essay in first person, others prefer a description written entirely in <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/third-person-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">third person<\/a>. (Check your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/essay-assignment\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">assignment guidelines<\/a> before you start writing.)<\/p>\n<p>Interested in seeing how one writer incorporated a hook sentence into a descriptive essay? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/a-vivid-description-of-the-beach-Wr9HCnQn\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">A Vivid Description of the Beach<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h3>Persuasive and argumentative essay attention grabbers<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-persuasive-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Persuasive essays<\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/the-argumentative-essay-everything\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">argument essays<\/a> attempt to convince readers about something.<\/p>\n<p>In order to make your readers believe your arguments or <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/what-is-a-claim-in-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">claims<\/a>, you need to use <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/3-types-of-essay-support-that-prove-you-know-your-stuff\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">evidence<\/a> (either from <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/writing-a-research-paper\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">sources<\/a> or personal opinion, depending on your assignment).<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7672\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401-300x120.jpg\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"201\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401-300x120.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401.jpg 640w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7672 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20201%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"201\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20201%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401-300x120.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401.jpg 640w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/books-2158737_6401-300x120.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Having a ton or great evidence and lots of support from sources does you no good, though, if readers aren&#8217;t first interested in reading your paper.<\/p>\n<p>To get them interested, try one of these types of attention grabbers:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>A startling fact<\/li>\n<li>A shocking statistic<\/li>\n<li>An interesting <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/put-quote-essay-like-pro\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">quote<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>These types of attention grabbers spark curiosity and get people thinking about your topic.<\/p>\n<p><b>Here are two examples of attention grabbers in a persuasive or argumentative essay:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><em>In 2016\u201317, students who borrowed money to attend college ultimately graduated from four-year institutions with an average of $28,500 in debt (<a href=\"https:\/\/trends.collegeboard.org\/student-aid\/figures-tables\/cumulative-debt-bachelor-degree-recipients-four-year-institutions-over-time\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CollegeBoard.org<\/a>).<\/em><\/li>\n<li><em>\u201cThere is scarcely anything that drags a person down like debt.\u201d\u2014P.T. Barnum<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>If you\u2019re a college student with student loans, you can relate to both of these statements.<\/p>\n<p>Thus, these attention grabbers not only pique readers\u2019 interest with a shocking statistic or interesting statement, but they do so by making <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-make-connections-between-a-text-and-your-world\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">a personal connection<\/a> with readers.<\/p>\n<p>Want to read a persuasive essay that uses a quote as an attention grabber? Take a look at <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/how-speeding-tickets-prevent-traffic-violations-eMGP3FFB\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How Speeding Tickets Prevent Traffic Violations<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Looking for an example argumentative essay that incorporates a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-powerful-social-issues-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">controversial statement<\/a> as an attention grabber? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/the-importance-of-child-marketing-to-the-economy-RpHGR9Lm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">The Importance of Child Marketing to the Economy<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h2>Want To Learn More About Writing Attention Grabbers?<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7887\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question.jpg\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question-300x200.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7887 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"attention grabbers\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question-300x200.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/05\/question.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>If you\u2019d like to learn even <i>more <\/i>about writing attention grabbers that work, take a look at these posts:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/what-is-a-hook-sentence\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">What Is a Hook Sentence? (Infographic)<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/good-hook-sentences\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Write Good Hook Sentences<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-start-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Start an Essay With a Bang<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Not sure if your opening line is enough to keep people reading? Let a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-editing-proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Kibin editor<\/a> help. Our editors will give you honest advice about how well your attention grabber works\u2014or doesn\u2019t.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Read this post to get an awesome grade on your next essay! Okay, so I can\u2019t exactly promise that by reading this post alone you\u2019ll get an awesome grade on your next paper. But that opening line likely grabbed your attention, right? You\u2019re still reading this post, so not only did the line serve as &hellip; <\/p>\n<div class=\"blog-read-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-attention-grabbers-that-work\/\" class=\"more-link btn btn-primary\"><b>Read more<\/b><span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;How to Write Attention Grabbers That Work&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":17,"featured_media":7886,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[75,132],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v20.7 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/wordpress\/plugins\/seo\/ -->\n<title>How to Write Attention Grabbers That Work \u2013 Kibin Blog<\/title>\n<meta name=\"description\" content=\"Need to get your readers&#039; attention? 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