{"id":589,"date":"2012-04-10T12:40:37","date_gmt":"2012-04-10T20:40:37","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/kibin.com\/blog\/?p=589"},"modified":"2013-09-10T12:04:29","modified_gmt":"2013-09-10T20:04:29","slug":"student-accepted-to-mit-with-kibins-help","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/student-accepted-to-mit-with-kibins-help\/","title":{"rendered":"Student Accepted to MIT With Kibin&#8217;s Help!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-thumbnail wp-image-603 alignleft\" title=\"mba-essays-mit-sloan\" alt=\"mba-essays-mit-sloan\" src=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/mba-essays-mit-sloan-150x150.png\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-thumbnail wp-image-603 alignleft lazyload\" title=\"mba-essays-mit-sloan\" alt=\"mba-essays-mit-sloan\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20150%20150%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" data-src=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/mba-essays-mit-sloan-150x150.png\"><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 16px;\">Kibin editors helped Scott Lansing polish his personal statement essays as part of his&nbsp;application to the prestigious <\/span><a style=\"font-size: 16px;\" href=\"http:\/\/mitsloan.mit.edu\/mba\/admissions\/\" target=\"_blank\">MBA program at Massachusetts Institute of Technology<\/a><span style=\"font-size: 16px;\"> (MIT). Scott, who calls himself a \u201cfringe candidate,\u201d credits Kibin\u2019s help with his acceptance into the program.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>Scott used two editors to proofread his essays for grammar, clarity, and style. <a href=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/profile?id=2386\" target=\"_blank\">Amelia<\/a> has edited 652,332 words on Kibin and has worked in the editing industry for ten years. <a href=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/profile?id=5464\" target=\"_blank\">Robert<\/a> has edited 59,417 words on Kibin and holds an MBA degree in Finance.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/editors\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-591\" title=\"professional-proofreaders-Amelia-Robert\" alt=\"professional-proofreaders-Amelia-Robert\" src=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM.png\" width=\"420\" height=\"282\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM.png 420w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM-300x201.png 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 420px) 100vw, 420px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-591 lazyload\" title=\"professional-proofreaders-Amelia-Robert\" alt=\"professional-proofreaders-Amelia-Robert\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20420%20282%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" width=\"420\" height=\"282\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20420%20282%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 420w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 420px) 100vw, 420px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM.png 420w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM-300x201.png 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/04\/Screen-shot-2012-04-10-at-12.58.59-PM.png\"><\/a>&#8220;Amelia and Robert showed care and effort beyond the call of duty to proofread my application essays and provide incredibly insightful and meaningful feedback. &nbsp;I am so grateful to them for their keen editing ability&#8221; Scott told us.<\/p>\n<p>Kibin\u2019s dedicated <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/editors\" target=\"_blank\">professional proofreaders &amp; editors<\/a>&nbsp;often go above-and-beyond basic grammatical edits by giving suggestions to improve personal voice, poignancy, and impact in writing. Requests for this type of editing have become so popular on Kibin that it inspired us to dedicate an entire editing type to it: our <a href=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-editing\" target=\"_blank\">Stylistic Editing<\/a>. Kibin\u2019s stylistic editors are analytical deep thinkers capable of giving sound, actionable advice, along with basic help with grammar, spelling, and punctuation.<\/p>\n<p>Scott explains the Stylistic Editing advice that helped him transform his admissions essays:<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIn one case, Amelia read one of my statements and suggested that it didn&#8217;t quite answer the question properly. &nbsp;All the components were there, but she felt they weren&#8217;t pieced together quite right. &nbsp;She provided very thoughtful, meaningful, high-level direction as to how to restructure the paragraph to be more effective&#8230;and she was right!\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Students applying to college, graduate school, law school, business school, or for internships can benefit from <a href=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\" target=\"_blank\">Kibin\u2019s editing services<\/a>. Our editors do not write or rewrite essays, but rather strive to bring out the author\u2019s voice in a clear and meaningful way.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Kibin editors helped Scott Lansing polish his personal statement essays as part of his&nbsp;application to the prestigious MBA program at Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). Scott, who calls himself a \u201cfringe candidate,\u201d credits Kibin\u2019s help with his acceptance into the program. Scott used two editors to proofread his essays for grammar, clarity, and style. Amelia &hellip; <\/p>\n<div class=\"blog-read-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/student-accepted-to-mit-with-kibins-help\/\" class=\"more-link btn btn-primary\"><b>Read more<\/b><span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Student Accepted to MIT With Kibin&#8217;s Help!&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":603,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[20,26,16,12,25,27],"tags":[],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v20.7 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/wordpress\/plugins\/seo\/ -->\n<title>Student Accepted to MIT With Kibin&#039;s Help! - Kibin Blog<\/title>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/student-accepted-to-mit-with-kibins-help\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"en_US\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"Student Accepted to MIT With Kibin&#039;s Help! - Kibin Blog\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:description\" content=\"Kibin editors helped Scott Lansing polish his personal statement essays as part of his&nbsp;application to the prestigious MBA program at Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). 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