{"id":4271,"date":"2020-04-06T06:00:00","date_gmt":"2020-04-06T13:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/?p=4271"},"modified":"2022-12-08T13:05:20","modified_gmt":"2022-12-08T21:05:20","slug":"how-to-revise-an-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-revise-an-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Revise an Essay and Make It Better Than Ever"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Think revising and editing aren\u2019t necessary? Check out this ad:<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"lazyloaded aligncenter wp-image-4777 size-full\" src=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad.jpg\" alt=\"software advertisement with corrected spelling error\" width=\"500\" height=\"339\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad-300x203.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad.jpg\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/revise-creative_kids_software-ad-300x203.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/p>\n<p>It looks like the educational software ad writers of this company don\u2019t know the difference between \u201ctheir\u201d (possessive) and \u201cthey\u2019re\u201d (they are).<\/p>\n<p>Would you feel confident purchasing educational software from a company that doesn\u2019t know basic grammar (or perhaps simply doesn\u2019t care enough to proofread its ad)? Probably not.<\/p>\n<p>Why? Because simple typos are generally a result of sloppy work\u2014and that\u2019s what your professor is going to think if you turn in a paper with the same type of errors.<\/p>\n<p>Typos and grammar errors are bad enough, but gaps in the content and logic of your paper are even worse. That means learning how to revise an essay is an essential skill.<\/p>\n<p>So grab a current <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">draft of an essay<\/a>, and practice these revision strategies to make your essay better than ever!<\/p>\n<h2>How to Revise an Essay and Make it Better than Ever<\/h2>\n<figure id=\"attachment_4979\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-4979\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"lazyloaded wp-image-4979\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising.jpg\" alt=\"academic paper with proofreading marks\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising-300x225.jpg 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising.jpg\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/01\/revising-300x225.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-4979\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">&#8220;Reworking, rewriting, removing&#8221; by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/mpclemens\/7074107883\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">mpclemens<\/a>, Flickr.com (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY 2.0<\/a>)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Before we dive into the details of <i>how <\/i>to revise an essay, think about whether you\u2019ll revise a digital copy or a hard copy.<\/p>\n<p>If you revise a digital copy, you might want to save your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/rough-draft-mishaps\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">first draft<\/a> and make revisions on another copy. This will let you refer to your original ideas if you rewrite. (Just make sure to give the files different names, so you don\u2019t accidentally submit the wrong version to your prof.)<\/p>\n<p>If you revise a hard copy, grab a pen (and maybe a highlighter) to <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-annotate-a-text\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">start marking up your pages<\/a>. It can often be easier to catch typos and other errors when reading a printed copy. A lot of seasoned authors use this method, so don\u2019t automatically dismiss this old-school way of editing before giving it a try.<\/p>\n<p>Now that you\u2019ve decided <i>how <\/i>you\u2019ll work, here are six revision tips you need to know to revise your diamond-in-the-rough draft into a polished piece of writing perfection.<\/p>\n<h3>Revision tip #1: Write and revise on separate days<\/h3>\n<p>When you\u2019re writing, every word you type sounds like perfection. If you read your essay the next day, though, you\u2019ll see that every word is far from perfect. You might even have your share of typos and sentences that are barely comprehensible.<\/p>\n<p><b>The takeaway: <\/b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-stop-procrastinating\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><b>Don\u2019t procrastinate<\/b><\/a><b>.<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Leave yourself enough time to revise. Write one day, and revise the next. You\u2019ll be surprised at what types of errors seem to appear.<\/p>\n<p><i>If you absolutely don\u2019t have time to wait a full day before you revise, at least wait a few hours.<\/i><\/p>\n<p><b>Think you don\u2019t have the time (or don\u2019t want to take the time) to revise? Consider this: <\/b>If you don\u2019t spend an extra day or two on revision, your professor will certainly let you know where you <i>should have <\/i>revised.<\/p>\n<p>My point: Your grade will thank you if you put in the extra effort.<\/p>\n<p>Need help managing time? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-manage-time-better\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">How to Manage Time Better When Writing (and Living Your Life)<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h3>Revision tip #2: Read your paper out loud<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_4775\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-4775\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"lazyloaded wp-image-4775\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"closeup of person reading a book\" width=\"500\" height=\"375\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading.jpg 500w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading-300x225.jpg\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/Revision-reading.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-4775\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">&#8220;Reading a book&#8221; by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/ckaroli\/1688897198\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Karoly Czifra<\/a>, Flickr.com (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-sa\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY-SA 2.0<\/a>)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Remember when you were a kid and you followed along with your finger as you read out loud? I bet you may have even paused to sound out words in your favorite book. It helped, didn\u2019t it? Why? Because it helped you comprehend the words, their meaning, and the meaning of the story. You could <i>hear <\/i>the words being spoken.<\/p>\n<p>While I\u2019m not suggesting that you necessarily need to follow along the page or screen with your finger (but you can if you like), I <i>am <\/i>suggesting that you read your essay out loud so that you <i>hear <\/i>how your paper sounds. It\u2019s easier to hear awkward wording and spot typos if you read aloud.<\/p>\n<p>If you have a friend who\u2019s willing to read your paper out loud, recruit him or her to help too. You can sit back, listen to your words, and note where you might need to revise.<\/p>\n\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Need to polish your paper?<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Let our expert editors help.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-editing-proofreading\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Edit my essay.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<h3>Revision tip #3: Check the content of your essay first<\/h3>\n<p>When people think of revision, they often think of correcting spelling errors, typos, and other grammatical errors. Though these are all part of the revision process, there\u2019s more to revision than just changing some punctuation or moving around a few words.<\/p>\n<p>You need to look at the content and the development of your paper too.<\/p>\n<p>Make sure you complete your revision of these larger concerns (content and development) <b><i>before <\/i><\/b>looking for smaller concerns, such as <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/ultimate-guide-perfect-word-choice-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">word choice<\/a>, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/common-grammar-mistakes\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">grammar errors<\/a>, and typos.<\/p>\n<p><b>Here\u2019s why: <\/b>Let\u2019s say you spend 10 minutes working on one sentence that you just can\u2019t seem to get right. You change the wording three times and move the comma twice in an attempt to craft the perfect <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/topic-\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">topic sentence<\/a> for your paragraph.<\/p>\n<p>If you spend all that time writing one sentence, what happens if you then revise the content of your essay and end up cutting the entire paragraph because it doesn\u2019t support your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/logical-fallacies-kill-your-argument\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">argument<\/a>?<\/p>\n<p>Yep, you wasted 10 minutes on one sentence. That 10 minutes would have been better spent working on your key arguments, rather than working on <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/punctuation-rules-you-need-to-know\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">punctuation<\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wordy-sentences-killing-your-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">wording<\/a>.<\/p>\n<h4>Questions to ask<\/h4>\n<p><b>Not sure what you should be looking for when you revise content? Here\u2019s a list of questions to ask yourself:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Did you complete the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/essay-assignment\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">assignment<\/a> correctly? If you were supposed to write a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-compare-and-contrast-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">compare and contrast essay<\/a>, for instance, and your paper is actually an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/writing-an-argumentative-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">argument essay<\/a>, you\u2019ll have quite a bit of revision to do.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Is your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-narrow-a-topic\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">topic appropriately narrowed<\/a>? For example, if you\u2019re writing a four-page essay and you picked a ginormous and complex topic like <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/sources-climate-change-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">climate change<\/a>, you\u2019ll definitely need to narrow the scope of your essay.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Does your introduction <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-an-essay-introduction\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">effectively introduce your topic and essay<\/a>? Does it include an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/write-attention-grabbers-that-work\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">attention grabber<\/a> that makes your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/writing-for-an-audience\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">audience<\/a> want to keep reading?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Is your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/turn-a-good-thesis-statement-great\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">thesis statement<\/a> clear and specific? Does it <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-thesis-statement\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">inform readers of the focus<\/a> of your paper?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Have you developed and defined key arguments to <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-write-a-paragraph-supports-thesis\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">support your thesis<\/a>? Are the arguments <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/3-types-of-essay-support-that-prove-you-know-your-stuff\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">supported with sufficient evidence<\/a>? (To check whether your paper is supported effectively, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/reverse-outline-use-one\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">try a reverse outline<\/a>.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Does your paper achieve its intended purpose? For instance, if you\u2019re writing a <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/persuasive-essay-writing-infographic\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">persuasive essay<\/a>, will your arguments actually persuade the reader? (Need help with being more persuasive? Check out <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/ethos-pathos-logos\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Ethos, Pathos, Logos: Be More Persuasive in Your Next Essay<\/a>.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Does your conclusion <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/essay-conclusion\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">effectively wrap up your paper<\/a>?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3>Revision tip #4: Consider style<\/h3>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-10311\" src=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/04\/heng-films-mpdIPhYqZ4Y-unsplash-640x360.jpg\" alt=\"stylish person in red jacket adjusting cuffs on dress shirt\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-10311 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20281%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"stylish person in red jacket adjusting cuffs on dress shirt\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" data-src=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/04\/heng-films-mpdIPhYqZ4Y-unsplash-640x360.jpg\"><\/p>\n<p>Once you\u2019ve revised the content of your paper, consider style.<\/p>\n<p>You may not initially think writing style is important, but it plays a crucial role in the overall impression your writing will make on the reader.<\/p>\n<p>Writing style is kinda like your own personal style. Whether you consider your style artsy, preppy, bohemian, casual, or punk, the clothes and hairstyle you choose say a lot about the message you put out to the world.<\/p>\n<p>In writing, elements such as tone, voice, or redundancy can say a lot about the message you\u2019re sending to the reader.<\/p>\n<p><b>Here are a few things to look for as you review the style of your essay:<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Make sure you\u2019re writing in the correct voice. Are you allowed to write in <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/use-first-person-writing-essays\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">first person<\/a>? Should you write in third person? (Third person is <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/third-person-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">usually preferred in academic essays<\/a>.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/how-to-control-the-tone-of-an-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Examine the tone<\/a> of your paper. If you\u2019re writing an academic essay, don\u2019t use slang and jargon. They\u2019re too informal. Instead, use <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/authoritative-voice\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">academic voice<\/a>. For instance, you could replace \u201cback in the day\u201d with \u201cpreviously\u201d or \u201cin recent years.\u201d<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Watch out for word repetition and <a href=\"http:\/\/writingcommons.org\/open-text\/collaboration\/common-comments\/style\/1281-writing-concisely-and-avoiding-redundancy\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">unnecessary redundancy<\/a>. If you\u2019re <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/legal-studies-and-law\/capital-punishment-1446\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">writing about the death penalty<\/a>, it can be easy to write the term \u201cdeath penalty\u201d over and over again simply because it\u2019s the topic of your paper. To avoid such repetition, try using synonyms, such as capital punishment, execution, or legalized killing.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>You might also consider a thesaurus, but use it cautiously. Even though the words might have similar meanings, they likely have different connotations.<\/p>\n<p>For example, if you look up the word \u201cquiet\u201d in a thesaurus, you\u2019ll see the word \u201cspeechless\u201d as a synonym. Clearly, these two words don\u2019t mean quite the same thing and can\u2019t always be used interchangeably.<\/p>\n<h3>Revision tip #5: Edit for grammar, spelling, and typos<\/h3>\n<p>Now that you have the content and style in place, it\u2019s <b>finally <\/b>time to look at those smaller issues\u2014grammar, spelling, proper word choice, and typos.<\/p>\n<p>Learn how to avoid these types of errors (and how to correct them) by reading these posts:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/dangling-modifier-grammar\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Dangling Modifier: Don\u2019t Make This Funny Grammar Mistake<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/misplaced-modifier-grammar\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Misplaced Modifier: How to Avoid This Hilarious Grammar Mistake<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/7-grammar-rules-everyone-learn\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">7 Grammar Rules That Everyone Should Learn<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/commonly-misused-words\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">33 Commonly Misused Words (and How to Get Them Right)<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/97-transition-words-essays-need-know\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">97 Transitions Words for Essays You Need to Know<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>And even though I <b>know <\/b>you have spell check, don\u2019t rely on it.<\/p>\n<p>Of course spell check knows if words are spelled correctly, but sometimes spell check misses things or autocorrects to something it shouldn\u2019t. For example, if you spell \u201cdefinitely\u201d wrong, spell check might change it to \u201cdefiantly.\u201d This is <i>definitely not <\/i>what you want!<\/p>\n<p><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-10587 size-full\" src=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/04\/checklist.jpg\" alt=\"blank checklist with boxes\" width=\"500\" height=\"313\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-10587 size-full lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20313%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"blank checklist with boxes\" width=\"500\" height=\"313\" data-src=\"http:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/04\/checklist.jpg\"><\/p>\n<h3>Checklist in a minute<\/h3>\n<p>I know the five strategies I\u2019ve included so far are a lot to remember, so for quick reference, I\u2019ve created this checklist that summarizes the revision strategies I\u2019ve included in this post. To recap, here they are again:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Write and revise on separate days. Set aside your draft, and return to it in a day or two to begin the revision process.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Read your essay out loud. By reading your essay aloud, you can hear errors and identify places where you might need to clarify or reword ideas.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Check the content of your essay first. Before you check grammar, check to see whether you\u2019ve met assignment guidelines, created a strong thesis, developed and supported your arguments, and created an effective conclusion.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Check the style of your paper. Look for correct point of view, proper wording, and appropriate tone.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Edit for grammar, spelling, and typos.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>I&#8217;ve also created a <a href=\"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1pkEtG2oBn4FUisA2bK3JTmiuvsl5kAlOY-KUZfn8Hww\/edit?usp=sharing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">printable revision checklist<\/a> for you so that you&#8217;ll always remember how to revise an essay to make it better than ever. Just pop it open, and click <strong>File &gt; Make a copy<\/strong> to snag your own copy to print out and mark up as you revise your next paper.<\/p>\n<h2>The Final Revision<\/h2>\n<figure id=\"attachment_4774\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-4774\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"lazyloaded wp-image-4774\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-300x199.jpg\" alt=\"feet crossing finish line in race\" width=\"500\" height=\"332\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-768x510.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-1024x680.jpg 1024w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-300x199.jpg\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-768x510.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/03\/REvision-finish-1024x680.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-4774\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">&#8220;Racers cross finish line in 5K run for Navy Chief birthday&#8221; by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/56594044@N06\/5600584959\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Official U.S. Navy Page<\/a>, Flickr.com (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">CC BY 2.0<\/a>)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Even after all this effort, sometimes it\u2019s not enough to revise your own work.<\/p>\n<p>While arguments might make sense in your own mind, they might not be as clear to others. Sometimes, you can even miss small grammar and wording errors because your mind reads what you <i>meant <\/i>to say, not what you actually typed.<\/p>\n<p>Need more convincing? Read <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/self-editing-is-killing-your-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Why Self-Editing is Killing Your Writing<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>And thus, the last strategy to use when revising an essay\u2026<\/p>\n<h3>Revision tip #6: Have <i>someone else <\/i>read your writing<\/h3>\n<p>Having others look at your work means they see it from a new perspective. They\u2019re reading as your audience, not as the writer, so they&#8217;ll see and understand things differently.<\/p>\n<p>In some English courses, you\u2019ll have the opportunity to have your <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/peer-editing-the-right-way\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">classmates read your work<\/a>. If you\u2019re not in an English course, you might have another friend (hopefully one who is good at writing) read your paper. You might also visit your school\u2019s writing center.<\/p>\n<p>Of course, it\u2019s <b>always <\/b>a smart idea to have a professional editor review your work even when you know how to revise an essay. And for that, you\u2019re in the right place: <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/editing-proofreading-services\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">the editors at Kibin<\/a> can not only provide you with expert feedback and help with the revision process but can also help you <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/be-a-better-writer-editor-can-help\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">become a better writer<\/a> along the way.<\/p>\n<p><em>Editor&#8217;s note: This post was originally published on February 1, 2017, but has been expanded to include fresh advice and additional resources.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Think revising and editing aren\u2019t necessary? Check out this ad: It looks like the educational software ad writers of this company don\u2019t know the difference between \u201ctheir\u201d (possessive) and \u201cthey\u2019re\u201d (they are). 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