{"id":2703,"date":"2015-06-29T17:00:00","date_gmt":"2015-06-30T00:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/?post_type=essay-writing-blog&#038;p=2703"},"modified":"2019-04-22T06:28:26","modified_gmt":"2019-04-22T13:28:26","slug":"examples-of-paraphrasing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/examples-of-paraphrasing\/","title":{"rendered":"10 Examples of Paraphrasing for a Smarter, Better Essay"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>We all know that when you write a research paper, you need evidence to support your arguments.<\/p>\n<p>That means you throw in a few quotes to prove to your professor that you\u2019ve actually used sources to help write your paper, right?<\/p>\n<p>Sure, it\u2019s important to add some quotes, but too many quotes can mean that your paper turns into one long quotation from other people, leaving no room for your own words.<\/p>\n<p>If your paper turns into one big quote, you\u2019re not even writing the paper. You\u2019re just copying other people&#8217;s&nbsp;words. While that may seem like the easy way out, you won\u2019t earn a good grade by doing this.<\/p>\n<div class=\"tm-tweet-clear\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"tm-click-to-tweet\">\n<div class=\"tm-ctt-text\"><a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/share?text=Your+assignment+is+to+write+a+paper%2C+not+copy+and+paste+a+paper.+Learn+to+paraphrase+here.&#038;via=kibin&#038;related=kibin&#038;url=https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/examples-of-paraphrasing\/\" target=\"_blank\">Your assignment is to write a paper, not copy and paste a paper. Learn to paraphrase here.<\/a><\/div>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/share?text=Your+assignment+is+to+write+a+paper%2C+not+copy+and+paste+a+paper.+Learn+to+paraphrase+here.&#038;via=kibin&#038;related=kibin&#038;url=https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/examples-of-paraphrasing\/\" target=\"_blank\" class=\"tm-ctt-btn\">Click To Tweet<\/a><\/p>\n<div class=\"tm-ctt-tip\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>After all, your assignment is to <i>write <\/i>a paper, not copy and paste a paper.<\/p>\n<p>Instead of copying a bunch of quotes to prove that you\u2019ve done your research, try paraphrasing.<\/p>\n<p>When you paraphrase, you\u2019ll include information from sources in your own words, so your professors will still know you\u2019re using sources, but you won\u2019t have to quote everything.<\/p>\n<p>To learn more, keep reading, as this blog post explains the do\u2019s and don\u2019ts of paraphrasing and includes 10 examples of paraphrasing&nbsp;for a smarter, better essay.<\/p>\n<h2>What is Paraphrasing?<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-3416\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-1024x1024.png\" alt=\"1333249\" width=\"500\" height=\"500\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-300x300.png 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-3416 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20500%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"1333249\" width=\"500\" height=\"500\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20500%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-300x300.png 300w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1333249-1024x1024.png\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Contrary to what you might think, paraphrasing is not simply changing a few words.<\/p>\n<p>Yes, in order to paraphrase, you will need to change words, but you just can\u2019t change the word \u201cgathering\u201d to \u201cparty\u201d and call it a paraphrase.<\/p>\n<p>A properly written paraphrase expresses the ideas of a source or passage in your own words and sentence structure.<\/p>\n<p>Remember, you\u2019re writing a paper for your class, so you should still use <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/essay-writing-blog\/academic-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">formal, academic language<\/a>. Don\u2019t use slang or jargon.<\/p>\n<div class=\"tm-tweet-clear\"><\/div>\n<div class=\"tm-click-to-tweet\">\n<div class=\"tm-ctt-text\"><a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/share?text=Contrary+to+what+you+might+think%2C+paraphrasing+is+not+simply+changing+a+few+words.&#038;via=kibin&#038;related=kibin&#038;url=https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/examples-of-paraphrasing\/\" target=\"_blank\">Contrary to what you might think, paraphrasing is not simply changing a few words.<\/a><\/div>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/share?text=Contrary+to+what+you+might+think%2C+paraphrasing+is+not+simply+changing+a+few+words.&#038;via=kibin&#038;related=kibin&#038;url=https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/examples-of-paraphrasing\/\" target=\"_blank\" class=\"tm-ctt-btn\">Click To Tweet<\/a><\/p>\n<div class=\"tm-ctt-tip\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h2>Isn\u2019t a Paraphrase Just Like a Summary?<\/h2>\n<p>No. A <a href=\"http:\/\/depts.washington.edu\/owrc\/Handouts\/How%20to%20Write%20a%20Summary.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">summary<\/a> is a shortened version of a piece of writing. <i>It is written in your own words and includes only the key points of the writing<\/i>. A summary is much shorter than the original source.<\/p>\n<p>A paraphrase is similar to a summary because you are rewriting the source in your own words. They key difference is that paraphrases include both key points and subpoints. Because a paraphrase includes detailed information it can sometimes be as long (if not longer) than the original source.<\/p>\n<p>In either case, it\u2019s important to keep the meaning of the original source. <i>You can\u2019t leave out words or add words to make the source fit into your paper if it changes the meaning<\/i>.<br>\n\t<\/p><div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Stuck on Your Essay?<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Check out thousands of example essays.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/blog-landing-essay\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Show me examples.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<h2>Do I Have to Cite a Paraphrase?<\/h2>\n<p>Yes. Always. There\u2019s no question as to whether you should or shouldn\u2019t cite. Always cite a paraphrase.<\/p>\n<p>When you paraphrase, you\u2019re rewriting someone else\u2019s words into your own words. You\u2019re essentially using someone else\u2019s ideas in your paper.<\/p>\n<p>If you claim the information as your own (which is what you do if you don\u2019t cite a paraphrase) you\u2019re plagiarizing.<\/p>\n<p>And, of course, plagiarism means you\u2019ll fail the paper and may even get kicked out of school!<\/p>\n<h2>How Do I Paraphrase?<\/h2>\n<p>First read the source carefully so you actually know what it means. You can\u2019t use it as a source if you don\u2019t understand it.<\/p>\n<p>Next find the part of the source you want to paraphrase. You\u2019re not rewriting the entire source in your paper, so don\u2019t paraphrase much more than a paragraph.<\/p>\n<p>Finally, and<i> pay attention to this step because it\u2019s important,<\/i> set the source aside.<\/p>\n<p>Write your paraphrase without looking at the original source. This will help you write in your own words and help you resist the temptation to use the wording and sentence structure of the original source.<\/p>\n<p>Need some help putting this into practice? Read the examples below to learn what you should and shouldn\u2019t do when paraphrasing.<\/p>\n<h2>10 Examples of Paraphrasing to Help Your Essay<\/h2>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 1. <b>\u201cPolice: &nbsp;Man breaks into Austin meat business, naps\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2916\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2916\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-2916\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1.jpg\" alt=\"nappingonmeat\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1-150x100.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-2916 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20334%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"nappingonmeat\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20334%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1.jpg 640w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1-150x100.jpg 150w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/nappingonmeat1.jpg\"><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2916\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Image by <a href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/pugetive\/2704355005\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Todd Gehman<\/a> (<a href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-nc\/2.0\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Creative Commons<\/a>)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cAUSTIN, Texas (AP) \u2014 Police have arrested a 28-year-old man who they say broke into an Austin business, stole a couple of sausages and fell asleep.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect:<\/b> A 28-year-old man in Austin, Texas didn\u2019t break into a business and run, like most criminals. Instead, he took several sausages then simply fell asleep inside the business.<\/p>\n<p>This paraphrase uses original wording and sentence structure, but it is plagiarized because it does not cite the original source.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>A 28 year old man in Austin, Texas didn\u2019t break into a business and run, like most criminals. Instead, he took several sausages then simply fell asleep inside the business (\u201cPolice: Man breaks into Austin meat business, sleeps\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>This paraphrase includes a proper <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/stress-free-mla-essay-format-8th-edition\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">MLA in-text citation<\/a> to give credit to the source.<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 2. <b>\u201cPolice: Man fled crash to avoid yelling girlfriend\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original&nbsp;source: <\/b>\u201cVINELAND, N.J. (AP) \u2014 Police in New Jersey say a man told officers he fled the scene of an auto accident because he \u2018didn&#8217;t want to deal with his girlfriend yelling at him.\u2019\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>New Jersey police state a man said he left the scene of a car accident because he didn\u2019t want to deal with his girlfriend yelling at him (\u201cPolice: Man fled crash to avoid yelling girlfriend\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>The paraphrase only changes a few words. Most of the words and sentence structure are too close to the original for this to be a good paraphrase.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>A man in New Jersey seemed to think leaving the scene of a car crash and being arrested was a better option than listening to his girlfriend yell. He told the police he fled because he didn\u2019t want to listen to her yell at him (\u201cPolice: Man fled crash to avoid yelling girlfriend\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 3. <b>\u201cPlumber Caught Dancing On The Job Has All The Fly Moves\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cThe video of Topen\u2019s dancing has racked up more than 400,000 views since it was posted on YouTube last week, and the plumber says he\u2019s already been approached in public for his autograph.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a><b>Incorrect: <\/b>The video has racked up more than 400,000 views since posted on YouTube last week, and the plumber has even been approached for his autograph.<\/p>\n<p>This paraphrase has two key problems: it doesn\u2019t cite the original source, and it copies too much of the original wording and sentence structure.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>Even though the YouTube video of the dancing plumber was only posted last week, it has already had more than 400,000 views. Topen has become an almost instant celebrity as strangers have even asked him for autographs (\u201cPlumber Caught Dancing On The Job Has All The Fly Moves\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 4. <b>\u201cThese Are Miley Cyrus\u2019 Crazy Dating Rules\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-2911\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing.jpg\" alt=\"examples of paraphrasing\" width=\"400\" height=\"505\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing.jpg 600w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing-238x300.jpg 238w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing-79x100.jpg 79w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-2911 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20400%20505%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"examples of paraphrasing\" width=\"400\" height=\"505\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20400%20505%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 400w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing.jpg 600w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing-238x300.jpg 238w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing-79x100.jpg 79w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/examplesofparaphrasing.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cAccording to <i>Heat <\/i>magazine, Miley has a list of intense rules for her men-to-be while out on dates. Apparently her assistant arranges what the guy must wear, do, and talk about on the date. She&#8217;s also not into flowers, so he&#8217;s banned from bringing her those.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>&nbsp;<b>Incorrect:<\/b> According to <i>Heat <\/i>magazine, Miley Cyrus has a list of rules for her men on dates. Her assistant arranges what guys wear and what they talk about. She doesn\u2019t like flowers, either (\u201cThese Are Miley Cyrus\u2019 Crazy Dating Rules\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>This isn\u2019t even a paraphrase. It just leaves out a few words. Remember, a paraphrase must provide the same information as the original and be written in your own word choice and sentence structure.<\/p>\n\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple\">\n\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-header\">Stuck on Your Essay?<\/div>\n\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-desc\">Check out thousands of example essays.<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-input\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"blog-cta-simple-cont-btn\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<a class=\"btn btn-warning\" href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-examples\/blog-landing-essay\" target=\"_blank\">Yes! Show me examples.<\/a>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t<\/div>\n\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>As stated in <i>Heat<\/i> magazine, Miley Cyrus has a number of bizarre rules for dating. She\u2019s so specific about what her dates wear, say, and do, that she has her assistant enforce these rules on dates. Cyrus doesn\u2019t even like flowers and won\u2019t let her dates buy them for her (\u201cThese Are Miley Cyrus\u2019 Crazy Dating Rules\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 5. <strong>\u201cTop<\/strong><b> 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cOften, a dog will chase an animal with the focus of a heat-seeking missile. But a wheelbarrow planter was not part of Belgian sheepdog Rider&#8217;s focus. Rider collided with the wheelbarrow while the squirrel escaped up a cedar tree in Joyce Biethan&#8217;s backyard.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;He&#8217;s kind of an all-or-nothing dog and he went into &#8216;all,'&#8221; Biethan said. &#8220;He chased after that squirrel with total disregard of what might be in front of him.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>His collision left Rider with a broken scapula, a broken rib and a punctured lung.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;He was in so much pain that I think he just tried to lay low,&#8221; Biethan said. &#8220;He prescribed himself bedrest.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Biethan said Rider did not need surgery and made a full recovery.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>A dog named Rider ran into a wheelbarrow but didn\u2019t need surgery (\u201cTop 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>Can you guess what\u2019s missing from this paraphrase? &nbsp;Details!<\/p>\n<p>The example does paraphrase some information, but it reads more like a summary, as it\u2019s missing key details from the story.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>Like many dogs, a Belgian sheepdog named Rider became so focused on chasing down a squirrel that he paid no attention to the wheelbarrow directly in front of him. The squirrel got away, but Rider collided head on with the wheelbarrow. Rider broke his scapula, broke a rib, and also punctured a lung. Though he was likely in a lot of pain, he only needed rest. He did not have to have surgery\u201d (<b>\u201c<\/b>Top 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 6. <b>\u201c10 Crazy Reasons People Got Rejected From College\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cCollege admissions officers all advise against writing a college admission essay about something that an applicant learned while stoned or drunk. \u201cBut we still get a few of those essays,\u201d a college admissions officer tells me. \u201cWe even got the classic one about how the student, while stoned, realized that the solar system is an atom and the earth is an electron. You\u2019ll remember, that conversation occurred in the movie <i>Animal House<\/i>.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>A college admissions officer told the story of a student who didn\u2019t get into college because he wrote an admission essay about the movie <i>Animal Hous<\/i>e (\u201c10 Crazy Reasons People Got Rejected From College\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>Remember what I said earlier about writing an accurate paraphrase? &nbsp;This is a good example.<\/p>\n<p>This attempted paraphrase is about college admissions essays, but that\u2019s where the accuracy stops. Make sure to read the source carefully so you paraphrase correctly.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>College admissions officers generally tell students not to write their admissions essays about a lesson they learned when being stoned or drunk; however, some students still ignore the advice. For instance, one student wrote about the conversation in <i>Animal House<\/i>, as if it were his own stoned experience, about the solar system as an atom and the earth as an election (\u201c10 Crazy Reasons People Got Rejected From College\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 7. <b>\u201cOver-the-top international fast-food items\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cFor some reason, cheese-topped donuts are quite popular in Indonesia, and in September 2013 KFC decided to get in on the action, offering a glazed donut topped with shredded Swiss and cheddar cheese.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a><b>Incorrect:<\/b> Cheese-topped donuts are popular in Indonesia. In September 2013, KFC decided to offer a glazed donut topped with shredded Swiss and cheddar cheese (\u201cOver the top international fast-food items\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>This example is outright plagiarism. This isn\u2019t a paraphrase at all; it simply omits a few words.<\/p>\n<p>Even though it includes a proper MLA in-text citation, it doesn\u2019t rewrite the original using your own wording or sentence structure.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>In 2013, a KFC in Indonesia began selling shredded Swiss and cheddar cheese topped glazed donuts, a treat that is popular in this Asian country. (\u201cOver the top international fast-food items\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase 8. <b>\u201cOriginal Batmobile, built in 1963, fetches $137,000\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-2869\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC.jpg\" alt=\"examples of paraphrasing\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC-149x100.jpg 149w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-2869 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"examples of paraphrasing\" width=\"500\" height=\"333\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20500%20333%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC-149x100.jpg 149w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/1024px-1960s_Batmobile_FMC.jpg\"><\/a><\/p>\n<h3><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cDALLAS (Reuters) &#8211; Holy Bargain, Batman! The original Batmobile fetched $137,000 at auction on Saturday, a small fraction of the $4.2 million that a buyer paid last year for another version built for the television show that aired during the 1960s.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>The Batmobile built for the Batman show during the 1960\u2019s sold for $137,000 at auction\u201d (\u201cOriginal Batmobile, built in 1963, fetches $137,000\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s a case of not reading carefully!<\/p>\n<p>Reread the original again. You\u2019ll see that the paraphrase is inaccurate. The Batmobile built for the 1960\u2019s TV show actually sold for $4.2 million.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>The original Batmobile only sold for $137,000 at auction, but the Batmobile built for the 1960\u2019s TVs show sold for $4.2 million the year before (\u201cOriginal Batmobile, built in 1963, fetches $137,000\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase&nbsp;9.<b> \u201cPolice: Man Swapped furniture while neighbors away\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cTACOMA, Wash. (AP) \u2014 A Washington state man is accused of swapping furniture with his neighbors while they were away.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe News Tribune reports the Lakewood man and a friend who is accused of helping him pleaded not guilty Wednesday to charges of residential burglary.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCourt papers say a couple who returned to their apartment Monday found their love seat, matching chair and other belongings gone. A recliner and TV stand were left in their place.<\/p>\n<p>Information on a traffic ticket and pizza receipt pointed to the neighbor.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe man told police he thought the couple had moved and abandoned their furniture. Police say he told them he was drunk when he decided to switch furniture, calling his buddy for help.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>A man switched furniture with his neighbor.<\/p>\n<p>Where do I start with the problems here?<\/p>\n<p>First, there is no citation. Without the citation, the paraphrase is plagiarized.<\/p>\n<p>Second, the paraphrase is too brief and does not summarize the information accurately.<\/p>\n<p>While the man did switch furniture with his neighbors, it\u2019s important to note that he did so without his neighbor\u2019s knowledge and while he was drunk.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct:<\/b> &nbsp;A man pleaded not guilty to residential burglary even though he switched furniture with his neighbors while they were away. He was drunk at the time and claimed he thought his neighbors had moved and abandoned their furniture (\u201cPolice: Man Swapped furniture while neighbors away\u201d).<\/p>\n<h3>Example Paraphrase&nbsp;10.<b> \u201cMan Scares off Thieves with Gun on Walker\u201d<\/b><\/h3>\n<p><b>Original source: <\/b>\u201cA 68-year-old Gastonia man says he scared off two men in ski masks trying to break in his home with his gun he can keep on his walker. And then he taped a note to his door saying if they try to break in his house again, he will be waiting on them.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1418 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Bad Example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/09\/1380071015_Delete.png\"><\/a>Incorrect: <\/b>A 68-year-old man scared off two men trying to break into his home. He had a gun on his walker. He taped a note to his door to warn them. It said he would be waiting for them if they came back\u201d (\u201cMan Scares off Thieves with Gun on Walker\u201d).<\/p>\n<p>This paraphrase uses too many of the same word choices, but it also contains another error. Simply breaking a paraphrase into multiple sentences does not mean you\u2019re writing it in your own words.<\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-1555 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%2025%2025%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"Good example\" width=\"25\" height=\"25\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/1380071640_Check.png\"><\/a>Correct: <\/b>Two men attempted to break into a 68-year-old man\u2019s home; however, they were scared off by the gun the man kept on his walker. Afterwards, the man taped a note to the door warning that he\u2019d be waiting for the burglars if they came back\u201d (\u201cMan Scares off Thieves with Gun on Walker\u201d)<\/p>\n<h2>What\u2019s the Takeaway?<\/h2>\n<p>Remember these three tips to paraphrase like a pro.<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>Include key points and sub-points from the original source.<\/li>\n<li>Write a paraphrase in your own words and use your own sentence structure.<\/li>\n<li>Always cite a paraphrase.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase.jpg\"><noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-2870\" src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-300x191.jpg\" alt=\"paraphrase\" width=\"300\" height=\"191\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-300x191.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-156x100.jpg 156w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase.jpg 392w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\"><\/noscript><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-2870 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20300%20191%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" alt=\"paraphrase\" width=\"300\" height=\"191\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%22http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%22%20viewBox%3D%220%200%20300%20191%22%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-300x191.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-156x100.jpg 156w, https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-writing-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase.jpg 392w\" data-src=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/paraphrase-300x191.jpg\"><\/a>Still worried you don\u2019t quite know how to paraphrase? &nbsp;Read <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lib.usm.edu\/legacy\/plag\/paraphrasing.php\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">How to Avoid Plagiarism: &nbsp;Paraphrasing and Summarizing<\/a> and <a href=\"http:\/\/isites.harvard.edu\/icb\/icb.do?keyword=k70847&amp;pageid=icb.page350378\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Summarizing, Paraphrasing, and Quoting<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t forget to have our <a href=\"https:\/\/www.kibin.com\/essay-editing-proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Kibin editors<\/a> review your paper. &nbsp;While they can\u2019t paraphrase your document for you, they can make sure that your paraphrasing makes sense and is grammatically correct!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>We all know that when you write a research paper, you need evidence to support your arguments. 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